Wednesday, February 24, 2010

He loves me not

Plucked flower
wilts away
once appreciated
now organic decay
broken petals, he loves me not
I was a flower
but now i rot

2 comments:

  1. plucked flower:
    I loved this, I really like it because it is so short, but it says it all. I have felt like this from my ex boyfriend.. we are still on and off forever.. something about us draws us back over and over and over
    and one of us feels this way at the end of each go, every time, both of us are in the same boat... its weird

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  2. Thank you so much. Sometimes i find that short poems can be the most poignant.

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