flutter by you butterfly
and land not softly on my locks
A breeze goes by, you know the sky
yet I am grounded, with the rocks
catch not my heart, nor my eye
you taunt me with a bitter truth
flutter by you butterfly
remind me not of my fleeting youth.
D, I have been meaning to send you a message for a couple of days. I have to tell you THANK YOU SO MUCH for your very thoughtful and helpful comments to me. Your comments have really given me good insight into myself and have made me think deeper, coming to important conclusions. I can't think you enough for your help!
ReplyDeleteYou are a wonderful poet, by the way. Do you ever submit your poetry?
Hi! Im so glad that you liked my comments because i was a little nervous that you would think I was being too forward. I have read every blog you have ever written even back to the beginning of your blog and I can really relate to you.
ReplyDeleteIm also really freaking proud of you. I know I dont know you but your an awesome inspiration and very courageous so thank you.
As for my poetry, i have submitted a few poems to contests and won those but they were minor online competitions. I am thinking of writing a book but i have been wanting to get a better feel for how people receive my poetry and also have been experimenting with different styles. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your compliment:)